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By Theodore O. Nielsen
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  • Jim

    The second line is 9 syllables.

    Haiku’s second lines are always 7.

    Posted 10:12 AM, May 15, 2009 | Reply | Report Abuse
    • Theodore Nielsen

      The poem has a 4-3-4-3 stanza structure. James said it is not a haiku, but an “open structure reflection.”

      Posted 12:47 PM, May 15, 2009 | Reply

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